Dear Class,
I really enjoyed reading your calm sea settings this week. Your half term challenge should you choose to accept it is.....
Write a sentence or a few sentences to describe this stormy sea scene.Ship in a storm
See if you can include any of the writing tricks we have learnt this half term.
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First names only under your writing
Above the crashing waves, the crackling lightning lights up the scene.
ReplyDeleteWhile the containership thunders through the
rough sea,the sea smashes the side of the sturdy ship.
Jack
Well done Jack
ReplyDeleteI like your prepositional opening sentence starting with above. You have mentioned ship twice in your second sentence, what other word could you use instead?
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I think i could use the word vessel.
ReplyDeleteVessel is a great alternative to ship. Can you see any other words you have used twice?
ReplyDeleteIn the great sea storm, the lightning that is brighter than the sun, crackles like a witch with a high picthed voice laughing cunningly. Meanwhile the sudden booms of heavy thunder makes the sailor panic cowardly. Also the moonlight blue waves whip each other aggresively.
ReplyDeleteEve