Wednesday, 13 October 2010

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The cat sat on the mat.
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14 comments:

  1. In front of the frost white door the flossy, black cat lazily lays on the crooked, confatable rug.
    Eve.

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  2. Across the ballroom floor the tiger like cat sat so calmly on his dirty,old rug and watched the dancing children come by. [Bethany]

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  3. While the owner of the clowdy white cat,was making the tea it sat calmly on the soft mat. Jack

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  4. The black and white sleepy cat sat on the smooth fury mat.



    Rhys

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  5. the skinny brown cat sat on the scruffy red flying carpet on the way to spain.

    by fleur

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  6. The perpel and pink robotic cat sat on the scruffy multi colered mat quwietly.

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  7. The sleepy brown cat sat on the beautiful colourful warm mat.





    Emily :)

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  8. The fat black cat put its glasses on, sat on the mat and thought it is the Postman Pat.
    Tomasz :)

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  9. Opposite the boiling hot fireplace the fluffy cat rolled over and drifted off to sleep on the wrinkled bu cosy rug. James

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  10. The ginger,fluffy cat sat on the peachy mat.

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  11. Underneath the blazing hot sun, the mysterious, wise cat comfortably slept on the wispy, oval shaped door mat.
    Eve

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  12. Early in the morning a black and white cat sat on the soft fluffy mat licking his paws next to the warm radiator.

    Daniel

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  13. The stripy black and white kitten lept and landed on the mat by the back door because he wanted to get outside to play in the garden.

    By Class 5 (Year 1 and 2) St John the Baptist Primary School.

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  14. That is a lovely sentence, Mr Addison and Class 5!
    Eve (3B)

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