Wednesday 6 April 2011

Who is this?

Making notes about female Celtic warriors (Soon to be revealed as Boudicca)

Rhys & Matthew C Compose music using Garageband on IPad2

Rhys and Matthew C have composed music to go with the first part of the story of Arachne & Athena. Boastful Arachne insults the gods.

Composing Music using GarageBand on IPad2

Matthew M and Jack have composed a sound track to go with the weaving competition between Arachne and Athena. Click here to listen to it.

Commentary on the weaving competition between Arachne and Athena

Commentary on the weaving competition between Arachne and Athena
by James & Hollie

Commentary on the weaving competition between Arachne and Athena

Commentary on the weaving competition between Arachne and Athena
by Seb and Jarret

Commentary on the weaving competition between Arachne and Athena

Commentary on the weaving competition
by Jade & Emily G

Tuesday 5 April 2011

Sentences with But

Can you write a good sentence with 'but' in it?
Comment as anonymous

My start of a myth by Eve

On an undiscovered planet there was a dutiful fashion designer By the
name of Debra. Toykota her planet was renown for their fantastic
clothing. Debra was THE best at designing clothes on her planets. At
midnight one day, she bumped into an alien and boasted. She told the
alien she was better than Kaylie the goddess of fashion. Soon he
warned her not to say that or she will anger the gods and goddesses.
She was so good that the stars spelled her name whenever she started
to sketch her next line of alien fashion. However, she was very
arrogant. She boasted about her marvellous designs to whoever passed
by.
Eve

Writing about a girl called Megan

A long time ago in a place called America lived a young sower
and designer called Megan. America had some judges coming to look for
designers. America had some finest designers but Megan was the best in
the whole world.
By Hollie
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Rewriting the start of Arachne

A long time ago a young girl called Ellie lived,she was a very good
writer and she lived at 2 bush-way close in the country of the
Caribbean and when people looked at her stunning writing they said she
Is a professional writer.Ellie was very arrogant but unfortunately one
day the goddess found out about this when she was very boastful to
people but the goddess thinks her self is the best.
Rhys
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New Myth opener

Long long ago, there lived a boy named Charlie who grow up in france
he was a professional artist every one thought he was the best ( even
he thought he was the best). Charlie had some of the best paintbrushes
in the WORLD. He loved painting but unfortunately he was such a
arrogant person and thought he was better than the goddess.
Bethany
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PE lessons

PE lessons
They are are doing playing who ever is White is the catcher who ever
is red they have got to run away from the white who ever is the white
they have got to run away from the red they are sitting down and mr
sands is telling them what to do they are doing is 3 moves in shoulder
stand seb is showing us 3 moves in shoulder stand Cassie was doing a
shoulder stand they are playing pirates in PE
Lilly

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Monday 4 April 2011

Writing an legend Introduction

A long time ago in a place called Totton lived a young boy called Adam. He was known for his
Wonderful writing. No writer was more descriptive than Adam.
Daniel

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